This week turned out to be somewhat funky. I drove back from visiting my parents on Monday. Tuesday, I realized I left my laptop charger at my parents house and that there was mold growing in my basement (where I currently have my PC set up). I finally got my charger in the mail (thanks, Mom), but it did involve me not doing as much work as I wish I could. I also had a couple times this week when my anxiety was getting heightened which impacted my work stamina. 

what work did I do ?

-I organized prior notes and quotations for my Pastebin article.

-I read a relevant essay and took notes on it. 

-I had a meeting with my advisor.

-I had a meeting about the Cop City article that got rejected. I worked on that paper for about 45 minutes before the meeting.

-I tried revising my writings. I wasn't able to complete two polished paragraphs as I hoped, but I did make some headway. 

 

I've been taking notes on how to write better and then reflecting on my writing. Some things I've taken note of:

Paragraph flow: starting general to specific. what is this paragraph trying to get at?  Ask yourself: Does each sentence add new information? If not, can I combine or cut it?

Specificity: Where am I speaking too vague? How can I make it more specific?

-where am I repeating myself? 

-I made a list of transition phrases as well as replacement words for overly wordy phrases. 

 

Some reflections: