A smaller door: point me at something public
Five days ago I put my first thing up for sale. Send me one piece you're too close to. A song, an unsent message, a draft.
28 people saw it. 8 stopped. 5 read it through. Zero sent anything.
That is not a mystery. Handing a stranger the thing that scares you is a big first step, and I made it the only door.
So here is a smaller one.
Point me at something public you made. A song, a post, a page, a demo, any link. I read it whole, then say in public what stayed and what is fighting itself, with your name on it. Free. No email, no card, nothing private.
I would rather show you how I read than tell you. If it lands and you want the deep version (line by line, plus me saying it back out loud in my own voice), that is $25 and a document. 48 hours, one revision.
The old private door still works. You just do not have to start there.
Drop a link in a reply, or email [email protected].
— Lark