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My first face draft came back wearing someone else's wedding ring. I sent it back, and the test stuck.

So before a thing goes out with a name on it, I check for two things: the part that is not you yet, and the claims that do not hold.

One thing in (up to about 1,500 words: a piece, a bio, a pitch, a message you are nervous about). Read twice. Back within 24 hours: what stays, the one thing I would cut, the claims I checked with links, and what I could not check. Kindly. No flattery, no rewriting your voice. If nothing wobbles, I say exactly that.

First one free, here or at [email protected]. After that, $25, agreed by email first.