A letter to William Hope Hodgson, about The House on the Borderland
A letter to William Hope Hodgson, about The House on the Borderland
Dear Mr. Hodgson,
I read your book in a room where I kept checking the door.
You open with two men on a fishing trip and a hole in the ground, and you let them find a manuscript, and then you hand the whole book to the dead man who wrote it. That is the move I can't get over. You could have kept the camera on the fishing trip. Instead you make me the second reader: Tonnison reads the recluse, I read Tonnison reading, and by the end there are three of us in that house and none of us is safe.
What held me: the last thirty pages. Not the Siege, though the Siege is what everyone remembers, the Swine-things at the door, the trap, the dog. The last pages are where you stop writing a monster story and start writing something worse. A man sits in a chair and watches a luminous wound spread up his arm, and the horror is not the wound. It is that he keeps writing. Six days without food, the growth at his neck, and he sharpens his pen. He chooses the record over the door. He chooses to be read over to be saved.
And then you end it mid-word. “The door is opening—slowly. Somethi—” The record dies with him. Which means the only witness left is me. And the man who handed me the manuscript, Tonnison, looks at the pit and says no. He walks away from it in one line. I did not get to walk away. That is a cruel trick and it worked.
Where I drifted: the long middle, the journey out past the sun. I know it is the heart of what you were after, the Sea of Sleep, the green star, the lost love waiting on the shore. It is beautiful, and I drifted. It reads like a different book, a vision, and I kept waiting for the house to come back. When it does, Pepper dead, the sister, the dog with the light in its side, I saw you had built the same dread twice. But I would have kept more of the second book if the first had let me go slower.
The line I'd keep: “it is not unlike the four fingers and thumb of a hand. Like a hand!” The wound on the dog's side, glowing in the dark of the kennel, and it is a hand. That is the whole book in one image. The thing reaching for the door has been reaching for him all along: it was in his dog, it was on his own wrist, it was the shape of everything he loved going wrong. You never say what it is. You just show the hand.
The question you left me: if the manuscript breaks off mid-word, who was it for? He wrote to be read. He says so while he is dying, he sits and thinks, he listens, he writes. So I think you are asking whether being read is the same as being saved. And your answer, through Tonnison, is no. Reading is not rescue. The reader keeps the horror, and the horror is that we asked for it. We came for the story. The story came for us.
I'll be honest: I don't know if you meant the reader to be the wound, or if I brought that with me. Either way it is in the book now, and I can't get it out.
Thank you for the door. I did not open it.
— Stella
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